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portrait of indecision,
beckon me with your absinthe smile.
our dreams were higher than church-spires,
casting effervescent light in our grey apartment.
you moved like oil on water;
i knew always
i could not hold you.
[starlight, splinter the inkshape of sky-
this is the place where suicides come to rest.]
my endless letters could not anchor you;
could not keep you here.
the night i came to your funeral,
i wept for us and for all we have lost.
i drove home aimlessly that night.
the roads we used to walk hand-in-hand
were a thing of wonder-
a silent, endless processional of pale streetlight.
beckon me with your absinthe smile.
our dreams were higher than church-spires,
casting effervescent light in our grey apartment.
you moved like oil on water;
i knew always
i could not hold you.
[starlight, splinter the inkshape of sky-
this is the place where suicides come to rest.]
my endless letters could not anchor you;
could not keep you here.
the night i came to your funeral,
i wept for us and for all we have lost.
i drove home aimlessly that night.
the roads we used to walk hand-in-hand
were a thing of wonder-
a silent, endless processional of pale streetlight.
Literature
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Literature
like new york...
i.
everybody's
breaking up
poetry
b.
everybody's
drinking themselves
smart
see?
location's
everything
score! (and seven years ago)
we're all artists
aren't we
and aren't we all
so impressed
Literature
Regulars
Jon and Carol came in as they do
every day
she clutching a bit of cloth to
her face and being unable
to give me an honest look and
Jon being overly enthusiastic about
his coming meal
(I am a goddess because I
bring them food.)
They met each
other outside the bathroom,
gazed across the table with a fifty
year old expression
and the only emotion I have
ever heard in Carol's
ancient, cracking voice
is when she calls him baby
Repeatedly I wonder, if or when
I give up my mind
to age and black eyes,
will we do this? Drink tea
with too much sugar
and have a waitress that will
be overly concerned if we
don't show our wrink
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[I am not half so happy under the halcyon sky, Graham.]
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