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You speak to empty air;
you tread on the dust of withered love.

I will leave before the sidewalk cools from sunlight,
before the memory of you envelops me again.
Once already you made me whole-

loveless promises left me in [ p i e c e s ]

Rejoice in what you have made in me:
               I dare you to take back every word
that implied i love
                              ---you.


May the earth open to swallow you; your vows:
          bittersweet memories in the tarnished metal of
a ring that drowns in liquid glass. Know this-

I truly loved you.
©2007-2009 ~grey-skies-industry
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[I knew all along, but I did not want to know. I saw before you spoke, and was silent. Now all of this is lost to you, the majesty of an uncertain future, the truest love I could offer, the cold blue dawn breaking over our apartment in New Orleans.

Rejoice. Rejoice in my newfound freedom.

You will never know how deeply you hurt me.]
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lol, first comment. :D

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"Forever Faithful to love and friendship,
Sebring"


truth
:cries:

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"i will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being..."
[modern hippocratic oath]

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haha, no offense, I think this one is horrible
And I think you're a callow insensitive bastard for treading on my heartfelt words. Surprise, I can be cold too.

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"i will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being..."
[modern hippocratic oath]

:flaguk:
dearest cousin! Don't give up your life! not yet, I still had so many plans and days to spend with you... Letting her harsh treatment get to you like this, it just breaks me, so much!
I'll do anything, just please, tell me you'll try for me, to get better... I hate seeing you like this... if anything, it should be me having my heart ripped to shreds! I foresaw this! I could have stopped it, but... I was a fool... I thought it would work, I... forced myself to think it would work.
I trusted her too much, and too soon later, did I realize how wrong I was and how far this would go...
I don't think a day goes by when I don't blame myself for all the pain you've gone through.
I should have kept my own promise and protected you from this awful hurt.
please hold on a bit longer... just untill I can get to you and make things better.
I LOVE you with all my heart, cousin. :heart:
Empi.

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"Forever Faithful to love and friendship,
Sebring"


truth
:ohnoes: !
I'm so sorry, I didnt know that's what you were talking about...

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"Forever Faithful to love and friendship,
Sebring"


truth
The hardest part is how she never called me, not once. How... after all we had been through, hours listening to her cry on the phone, comforting her, falling in love...

I honestly realized I was in love a month before we broke up. I should have known something was wrong.I can't belive it all-

And finding out about that, well...

I mean, that's why I did what I did. You're the only one who knows, Em Empi. the only one who will ever know.

She couldn't possibly fathom the ache, the denial, the pain I feel.

It was not the blade that killed me: It was when she twisted the knife, I broke.

Forgive me.

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"i will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being..."
[modern hippocratic oath]

:flaguk:
Shh, don't let my true friends worry, too. D:

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"i will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being..."
[modern hippocratic oath]

:flaguk:
Jews did relationship collapse?

NEVAR FORGET

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Mon centre cède, ma droite recule, situation excellente, j'attaque.
That's such a beautiful poem! I feel so bad for you!

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I read way too many books, watch too much anime, and am way too obsessed with Japanese culture! I am the world's biggest dork

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