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you tie your words together
         like loose thread, leaving
   nothing left to trip over: no trail to follow.

          your voice is shallow, heartbeat
     steady as the cadence of the second-hand.
            Away from the window,
                 admission flows forth like mercury.
   
         yes, i held my breath. yes.
                 i can still smell the earth;
             can still imagine the

vignetted
         insouciance of spring
             bursting into sepia life
        like the birth of toads.
[some things are not so soon forgotten.]
              
        i want you to know, sunflower
             intimate with the baked
        clay of the earth;  i do not speak
             with you and hear the parlance

              of victims-
                     but of vines.
:icongrey-skies-industry:

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for my cousin, who paints vivid pictures of memories far better than i can ever convey in words.

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:icongrey-skies-industry:
the beginning of it was salvaged from another poem that i ended up hating. :<

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"i will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being..."
[modern hippocratic oath]

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:iconplastic-city-prince:
That's how I write most of my poems. I get an idea and start writing, work on it really hard for days, then realize I hate most of it, but I still keep it for a while until inspiration strikes for something else, then I manage to fuse them all together. :D

I really like the ending, for the win. :)
and I'm actually much too tired right now to come up with something more to say, so sorry. I just woke up. ^^;

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\"Why is there evil? How many angels can dance on the head of a pin? How do we make love stay?\"- Sylar
:iconkifgem79:
Gorgeous. Absolutely beautiful

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:rose:
:iconthornempire:
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ILOVEYOU. :D

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"Forever Faithful to love and friendship,
Sebring"


truth
:icongrey-skies-industry:
HOLY SHIT I LOVE YOU TOO :D

--
"i will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being..."
[modern hippocratic oath]

:flaguk:
:iconthornempire:
:iconcatplz: <- THIS SOMEHOW SIGNIFIES MY LOVE.

--
"Forever Faithful to love and friendship,
Sebring"


truth
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Very good indeed. I take a lot of ideas from other thing's I've written and I didn't like and put it into something I like better.

--
Writer's block is not the problem. It is the fear of writer's block that is the problem. -Peter David

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